Dark Lord Zero version 1

soooooo yeah. this is how he will appear for the most part in my comic. this is zero's false body, one that he made to contain his essence so he would be able to feel emotions and leave the realm he and zero2 were trapped in. ill make a better explanation when im less tired

but please, constructive critisism. i want to know how to make the design better.

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EDIT

here is a slightly spoilered bio for my version of zero. trying out a different version of a bio.

WARNING MINOR SPOILERS TO MY FANFIC

name: zero

species: essentially a body grown in a test tube, with zero's essence implanted. with this form, he is able to feel emotions. without his meat suit, he is a godlike being, and those who still worship him and his twin sister, zero2, know them both as the banished ones, gods of raging life and despairing death. interesting titles, as neither feel emotions in their pure forms.

age: ???

home world: originally from a dimension sealed off from the known universe, he was, along with zero2, able to watch and manipulate anything in the universe. they could not, however, leave at anytime, and where doomed to forever watch a world that they felt nothing of.

powers (pure form): in his pure form, he is incredibly powerful. a godlike being, he can see all that happens. anytime, anywhere, all at the same moment. he can warp space and, to an extent, time itself. his blood is highly energized and acidic, and if it where to come in contact with flesh, it would emediatly vaporize. he fires it from six slit-like marks on his body, making him extremely dangerous.

powers (current form): his powers are severly reduced in his new body, and he is in fact physically weak, yet still stronger than most opponents. his greatest strength, however, is his great strategic prowness. no longer able to see all that happens, he relies on his dark matter underlings to bring him back information.

weapon(s) of choice: he is able to wield a wide variety af weapons, but he favors a massive curved sword. nothing special about it, just a plain, well forged sword. he is also very skilled in taking out opponents barehanded, usually by strangulation.

personality: unable to feel emotions, zero had little to no personality. but using his new body, his personalitly has emerged. he has been revealed as sadistic, cruel, and sometimes sarcastic. very intelligent, he prefers to use strategy over brute force to achive victory. he views the entire universe as an opponent in a chess game, a game that he greatly enjoys winning. he declares himself above cheating, and says anyone who has not heard of dark matter or himself and thus had no way to defend themselves "uninformed."

enjoys: winning; torture; murder; one on one fights with skilled opponents, preferably ones far larger than him; mementos of great victories; games of cat and mouse (guess who's the cat); strangly, long running, inside jokes; science expiriments

dislikes: unfair fights; guns (views them as cowardly ways to kill); zero2; losing; anything that he won by use of brute force


i might end up adding more later, if you find something contradictory, PLEASE TELL ME. POLITLY.