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Hoshi No Kaabii A Recurring Nightmare #11

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"This comic has met with a terrible fate, hasn't it?" :ashamed:

ok, i am honestly ashamed to show this page. not only is it a week late, and is the only one i am submitting this time, but it is also very sloppy looking. i just started coloring this morning and tried to get it done quickly. the next page isnt even fully sketched out, and kawasakis resturant will be my doom.

for those who cant read the red letters in the top row (which i dont blame you if you cant) they say "possess, filth, dark, destroy, hate, divide, army." at the very bottom, fumu says "Dang it Bun!" and bun says "No dont punch me there!" Also, the first panel sucks, so ill tell everyone what it is. its a close up of fortas eye, showing her and the mystery girl reflected inside. i failed at it >.< AND those are dust trails behind bun and fumu. i failed there too.
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I like the art in the last panel. It adds to the mysteriousness behind Forta and her origins by her denying that anything happened. Also, Kirby sorta speaks!