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Hoshi No Kaabii: A Recurring Nightmare #37 by ssbbforeva Hoshi No Kaabii: A Recurring Nightmare #37 by ssbbforeva

IM BACK IN BUSINESS, BABY! :squee:

well, for now at least. BUT BAND IS FINALLY OVER, WOOOOO! after a 16 hour day, of course. :faint:

 

wow, it feels like its been forever since I drew meta knight, forta, and fumu. (the Halloween pic don't count, I drew that in the beginning of October).

im getting so tired of drawing the night sky. :slamhead: at least now I can do an easy, nightmarish background for the next page or so.

and in case it wasn't clear enough, forta sees the pink haired girl, but at the same time she hears what fumu is saying.

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lunalovesall123 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
i found this series and i didnt go to the beginning i started at #26 so can someone catch me up please?
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Sup-Gurl Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student Digital Artist
oh god that girl again '-'  DUN DUN DUN the pink haired girl is a illusion '-'
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Violetthefox0001 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This page is so amazing! Everything about it! Can't wait to see more from you ^^
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MelesPrower Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
F**KING HELL!!!! SO MUCH EPIC ART IN THIS ONE PAGE!!!
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WVolt13 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist
Yesh i finally got to read your comics once again oh and btw nice to meet you ssbbforeva .... Im just new here on deviant and I've been reading and admiring your cool fan fiction and your awesome drawings of Kirby characters, dragons, etc.
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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well then, welcome to dA! :D
im glad you like my art, thank you very much! :hug:
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WVolt13 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist
Thanks :D and your welcome ... I'm actually glad I joined along :)
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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah, dA is pretty dang awesome, and being able to hear what other artists have to say about my art really helps me improve.
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WVolt13 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist
when will be the next comic ? so excited to find out whats next :D
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Hurricane4510 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
its evil fumu!! dun dun DUN!!!!!!
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kirbecio Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
Great page indeed, as always!^-^ Good to hear you're back in bussiness! \o/
watching someonewho looks creepy with a friendly voice... 
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MetaKnightRoxMySox Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Demon Fumu stares into my soul
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KingAsylus91 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Wow! She saw Fumu like a monstrous witch in her nightmare.

But is that her nightmare or what?!
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Substitute101 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
oh SHI-
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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DEMON GIRL COME KILLZ EVERYONE! :nuu:
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Substitute101 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
<XD;;;Forta's gonna react badly to that,isn't she?
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TheRedAuthar Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Swiggy!  

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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD wut? that's a good thing, right?
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TheRedAuthar Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
Yes.  Yes it is. 
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Arrol-S Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh, does that mean w can talk more agian?
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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^; apparently not, i still haven't been on much. my internet is getting worse and worse, so its gotten almost difficult to go online.
im so sorry dude. :forgiveme:
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Arrol-S Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh..Well, it's ok then. Do you know what's happening?

I got news, I got a Nintendo 2DS now.
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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

what do you mean? like, is something wrong? :worry:

 

oh, really? how is that working out for you? is there any difference between it and the 3DS, besides then obvious?

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Arrol-S Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm lonely as shit, that's all.

I really don't know, because I never used a 3DS. All I know is that it can't fold and it can't go in 3D.
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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

ah man, sorry :worry: has no one else been on lately?

 

huh, sounds almost like a Gameboy design. are you enjoying it?

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Arrol-S Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
just Laura mainly.

I'm enjoying it, but I have no games.
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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Laura? :confused:

 

well, if I may make a suggestion, you should try out some of these, I find that they may be some of the few hidden gems: Monster Tale, Drawn To Life,  Okamiden (play Okami first though), and, one that is not so hidden, Dragon Quest IX

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XerxesTexasToast Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student General Artist
I like the bit of background with Sandstar; it really puts Forta in perspective. It's also a good place to jump off into the Dark Matter's story. Once again, excellent job, and I shall eagerly await the next installment!
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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you so much for the feedback! :D
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jointhelightside Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Yeah more! Great story though!
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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks! :D
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jointhelightside Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
No prob Neko-Emoji-01 
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Kitzykat Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
band is over for you


my team goes to playoffs because only lost 1 this season

man i live in alabama everything sports here is like insane ;_;

espacielaly band cause dasdasdasdasd
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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well, how is band over there for you? this year, our band's discipline has been TERRIBLE, they never shut up! needless to say, nobody was taking anything seriously, so we all sucked pretty dang bad.
sports are a big thing as well, only our football team is terrible, so no one wants to get so much into the mood.
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Kitzykat Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well of course you can't expect band kids to have 100% discipline skills
but if you can direct their attention and put it into the practice then it'll be a good practice

we have problems with chatting a lot too but we have a good teacher who tells us we need to take it seriously

band here is a big deal as well

like for example... we go to tampa florida to the outback bowl over christmas break and we perform our competition show
whoever wins the competition of the marching show gets to march that show in the pregame of the outback bowl

we're the only band performing our marching show therefore we win by default ;_;

THAT'S LIKE 10,000+ PEOPLE THAT ARE GOING TO SEE US ;_;
AHHHHHHHHHHH
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starsailor5 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student Filmographer
...damn I'm anxious now xD
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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD good!
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starsailor5 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Student Filmographer
XD I hate cliffhangers!! and thigns that interest me cause then it get to me lol
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Zerodius Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Well, nice to see a new page of this.

Unlike usual, not really going to dwell into criticism of the art but rather, will go on about the plot.

On one hand, it is an interesting question as to how Forta's world vanished (most probably had to do with Zero and the current crisis)... on another hand, I am starting to fear that Forta may end up soaking up attention and stealing the spotlight, relegating Kirby to the background. An awful lot of the plot has been about Forta and her amnesia with no mentions of the actual plot for the comic (Zero and the Dark Matters).

Frankly? Although Forta is a powerful character and was pretty interesting in revealing the Dark Matter threat, I'd see her as more of a crutch ; her anger issues + ease of being possessed even if no direct Dark Matter is performed means that she won't excuse Kirby of having to grow into the hero who can stop Zero.


Basically, I may sound weird but I'd like to see more of the cast and more of the plot being actual events rather than more Forta flashback speculation (unless relevent, which I feel is increasingly not as such).
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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah, that is something that I've been having trouble with ^^;
I wanted at first to have the story revolve around Kirby and meta knight, with forta, fumu, and bun as supporting characters, but i couldn't instantly put in development for Kirby, as he will gradually start to *cough* sorry, spoilers, and i didn't want to focus solely on meta knight in the first part of the story. so now im having the main light on Kirby, meta knight, and forta. the focus will be revolving between them, with forta as the catalyst to all of the events and a stepping stone into the next phases of the story. that said, i have no experience in story writing, which may be why everything may be becoming less interesting.
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Zerodius Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
It's a good thing to be able to admit your own mistakes.

What I'm saying is that you've spent a lot of pages on Forta non-stop and I think it's time you think of a way to shift the focus back to Kirby and the main cast. Kirby, in particular, suffer from being under-developed in the anime continuity.

Again, Forta *is* interesting... but be wary of making her steal the spotlight too much. I feel she had enough pages in a row about her ; give the other characters an opportunity to shine, to do something, to contribute.
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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you :thanks:

yeah... again, its my lack of experience that is causing this, what is the word, unnecessary attention on forta. she has started to look like one of those typical insane demon OCs due to my poor choices, and im worried to death that people may start shipping her with meta knight as some of my future plans involve the two of them. but I hope that with time, my storytelling skills will improve, emphasize on "hope."

and thank you for the feedback :)
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Zerodius Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
It's a pleasure.

P.S. Shipping happen pretty much no matter what. Don't sweat it and keep trucking. Worrying about it will bring nothing but stress, frustration, and disappointment in humanity.
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Drakohahn Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Ouch Meta Knight! That's rather harsh. Sure, it's better the truth get out now than at a more inconvenient time, but...poor Forta.
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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
since when has meta knight been one to beat around the bush? ;P
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Drakohahn Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
I'm not talking about beating around the bush. But his tone came off as overly forceful, like he was upset about this discovery.
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Nell-tu-lover Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student General Artist
AHH!! :faint:
Is it another bad dream? Or illusion?! D:
I'm glad you're back in your story!
Do your best~! :D
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ssbbforeva Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
'tis a waking nightmare. ;)
thank you, ill try my hardest! :D
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Nell-tu-lover Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Student General Artist
Yup, you're welcome! :3
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Attackrage92 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
kind of a "get out of my head"

i'd love to know what's going on in that mind of yours forta
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