The Dark and the Light

yup. made on the same day as my white matter character sheet [link]

ok, this has gone through so many edits. i wanted the white matter to appear knightly yet detached, and at first it had the same appearence as the dark matter swordsman, or torment as i call him. then i decided to scrap the idea as it looked very unoriginal and went for the haunted armor look instead. the dark matter wasnt nearly as hard, but took a good deal of planning. i wanted an alien and flowing yet broken feel, but not very liquidy. it had a tail in the sketch, but it didnt really sit well with me and so i erased it. please tell me what you think of both of them, and please give critiques